The people in my group were Taylor, Bo, Allie, and Makenzie. I really liked all of their stories. Taylor's was written to seem like it was an episode of Supernatural which i thought was really interesting, I'd like to write an episode for my favorite tv show. Bo's was so creepy and mysterious as usual, probably the scariest story i read out of the group. Allie's had the most interesting back story, instead of just having a random bad guy going after a random person, she told you the reason the dead mermaid person was there. Makenzie's was so well written and the part where the main character died at the end was so intense! All of their stories were so good!
This halloween I was going to go to a bonfire and camp out there, but my friend's plans ended up being canceled and I don't want her to be all alone on halloween so I'm going to hang out with her instead.
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